ЭССЕ 14 ШАГОВ К УСПЕХУ. ЗАДАНИЕ 38. ЕГЭ АНГЛИЙСКИЙ ЯЗЫК.

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14 шагов
к эссе на 14 баллов

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Шаг 1: Выбираем задание

Внимательно читаем оба задания и выбираем одно для написания эссе. Для того, чтобы выбрать, обращаем внимание на: 1) тему проекта, 2) формулировку проблемы и 3) заключения:

Imagine that you are doing a project on … … … … … … . Use the following plan:
Use the following plan:
– make an opening statement on the subject of the project;
– select and report 2–3 facts;
– make 1–2 comparisons where relevant and give your comments;
– outline a problem that can arise with … … … …. …. and suggest a way of solving it;
– conclude by giving and explaining your opinion on … . … … … … … .

Выбираем то задание, в котором тема проекта, проблема и заключение кажутся понятными и простыми для написания.

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Use the following plan:

– make an opening statement on the subject of the project;

– select and report 2–3 facts;

– make 1–2 comparisons where relevant and give your comments;

– outline a problem that can arise with celebrating favourite holidays and suggest a way of solving it

– conclude by giving and explaining your opinion on the role holidays play in our life.

38.1 Imagine that you are doing a project on what most favourite holidays with children aged from 10 to 12 living in Zetland are. You have found some data on the subject – the results of the opinion polls (see the pie chart below). Write 200–250 words.

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Шаг 2: Выделяем главное в задании

38.1 Imagine that you are doing a project on what most favourite holidays with children aged from 10-12 in Zetland are. You have found some data on the subject – the results of the opinion polls (see the pie chart below). Write 200–250 words.

Use the following plan:
make an opening statement on the subject of the project;
select and report 2-3 main features;
make 1-2 comparisons where relevant and give your comments;
outline a problem that can arise with celebrating favourite holidays and suggest a way of solving it;
conclude by giving and explaining your opinion on the role holidays play in our life.

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Шаг 3: Анализируем статистику

Отмечаем самый высокий и самый низкий процент, одинаковые/ близкие проценты.

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1 абзац, вступление: There are many different holidays to be loved by children.
2 абзац: 1 факт – 50%+35%; 2 факт – 25% +20%; 3 факт – 15% + 13%
3 абзац: сравнение = 50% vs 35%
4 абзац: проблема = celebrating holiday causes injuries , solution = parents’ control
5 абзац, заключение: very important -> the key to a good rest

Шаг 4: Продумываем содержание эссе: пишем краткий план

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Шаг 5: Пишем вступление


There are many different holidays to be loved by children. The aim of my current project is to examine what most favourite holidays with the people aged from 10 to 12 living in Zetland are. As part of my project, I found a pie chart with some results of relevant opinion polls. In this essay I am going to analyze my findings and express my opinion on the subject of the project.

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Шаг 6: Пишем 2-й абзац (2-3 факта)


Overall, according to the pie chart, the respondents choose six best holidays to celebrate. Most surveyed in Zetland prefer Christmas and New Year’s Day, 50% and 35% respectively. It is also clear that the least popular holidays are April Fool’s Day and St. Valentine’s Day with 15% and 13% voting for them. It is also noticeable that a middle proportion of the children enjoy Halloween (25%) and Victory Day (20%).

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Шаг 7: Пишем 3-й абзац (сравнение + комментарий)


Further analysis of the pie chart reveals that the figure for celebrating Christmas is 15% higher than for marking New Year’s Day. This is probably because these youngsters are more religious and Christmas is more essential for them.

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Шаг 8: Пишем 4-й абзац (проблема + решение)


Although celebrating Christmas is a very popular activity, it is not without its flaws. Children can face several problems connected with arranging a party. The most serious one is the possibility of being injured while setting off fireworks. I think parents’ control is the best solution to this problem. For example, parents should supervise the process.

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Шаг 9: Пишем заключение


In conclusion, I strongly believe that holidays play a significant role in our life because they fill us with positive emotions and help cope with stress. Besides, it is a good chance to unwind and get closer to our family.

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Шаг 10: Проверяем содержание

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Шаг 10: Проверяем содержание

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Шаг 10: Проверяем содержание

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Шаг 10: Проверяем содержание

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Шаг 10: Проверяем содержание

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В эссе необходимо соблюдать нейтральный стиль.
Выделены 4 типа стилистических ошибок:

1)риторические вопросы;
2)разговорные выражения и конструкции типа Let's… (Let us и Let me – нейтральный стиль);
3)сниженная лексика типа folks (people, …);
4)3 варианта стяжённых форм:
–типа I’m, he’s;
–отрицательные формы типа don’t, aren’t;
–формы модальных глаголов типа can’t, mustn’t (Исключение: needn’t).

Шаг 11: Исправляем ошибки в стилевом оформлении

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Шаг 12: Исправляем языковые ошибки (если есть)
Шаг 13: Считаем слова

( допустимо 200-250 слов +/- 10%, т.е. 180-275 слов)

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There are many different holidays to be loved by children. The aim of my current project is to examine what most favourite holidays with the people aged from 10 to 12 living in Zetland are. As part of my project, I found a pie chart with some results of relevant opinion polls. In this essay I am going to analyze my findings and express my opinion on the subject of the project.
Overall, according to the pie chart, the respondents choose six best holidays to celebrate. Most surveyed in Zetland prefer Christmas and New Year’s Day, 50% and 35% respectively. It is also clear that the least popular holidays are April Fool’s Day and St. Valentine’s Day with 15% and 13% voting for them. It is also noticeable that a middle proportion of the children enjoy Halloween (25%) and Victory Day (20%).
Further analysis of the pie chart reveals that the figure for celebrating Christmas is 15% higher than for marking New Year’s Day. This is probably because these youngsters are more religious and Christmas is more essential for them.
Although celebrating Christmas is a very popular activity, it is not without its flaws. Children can face several problems connected with arranging a party. The most serious one is the possibility of being injured while setting off fireworks. I think parents’ control is the best solution to this problem. For example, parents should supervise the process.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that holidays play a significant role in our life because they fill us with positive emotions and help cope with stress. Besides, it is a good chance to unwind and get closer to our family.

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Шаг 14. Со спокойной душой ждем заслуженные высокие баллы ;-)
Учитель английского языка высшей категории МАОУ «СОШ № 37» Левенкова Ю.А.